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=__Everything About Me __=

My name is Tom Lee. My Korean name, which is my __real__ name, is Sangheon Lee. I was born in Seoul, Korea on December 19th, 1995. My life is definetly not extraordinary but it is not a boring one either. I try to do everything I think is intersting and try to make my life as exciting as possible. I stayed in Korea until I wa s g rade 4 and then came to Canada, looking forward to learning English. In Canada, I did not only learn to speak English but also developed a tremendous interest toward sports. My main sports are soccer and basketball and I enjoy playing other sports as well. As a kid, I always had a strong interest toward soccer. Currently, I am playing in Cordova Bay U16 Gold team and I enjoy the game very much. I am hoping I can keep playing throughout the future. As for basketball, I do not play on any teams; however, I am currently trying to get in to the school junior basketball team. Another thing I am significantly interested in is Music. I have a passion for both playing music and listening to music. I play various instruments including clarinet, soparano saxophone and piano. Even though practicing can be a nuisance sometimes, overall, playing music is an enjoyable hobby for me. Thus, in my opinion, I live an interesting life which I hope I can carry through to the distant future.

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